Sorrow (rictameter)
Sorrow,all consumingtears of no tomorrow.Anguished soul cries out from within.Weighted burden of words left unspokenspill forth from lover's trembling lips,shouted to the wind, thenfall on deaf...
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Intense! Brimming over with feeling! I love this!!!!BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais Nin
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Wanda, I already commented on this at CPWF butI do want to say here how well this turned out for you. I clearly expresses sorrow.JanPlease join me at The Poetry Factory or view my personal webpage at...
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Thank you! Hi Barry,Nice to "meet" you, glad you enjoyed my poem!LOL Jan,Actually, you replied to this here in the 'challenge' forum not at CPWF. Tee hee...You really are busy! Have a great vacation...
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Duh... where's a wall I can bang my head up against? LOLWell, at least I remembered that I had replied to it! OK I'm really gonna enjoy the rest this week!!! (I hope) see ya!JanPlease join me at The...
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I took the liberty of centering the text for the full effect of the rictameter.H.And it harm none, do thy will. Blessed Be!
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Wanda...Lots of feeling coming through and a little rhyme there too.... Very nice. I'll have to learn this form and give it a try.Sue
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Heinzs,I never center minelooks like a spaceship to me! LOLSue,Thanks so much for the read. I'll look forward to reading yours!Wanda
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